[html4all] HTML4all in public?
Philip TAYLOR
Philip-and-LeKhanh at Royal-Tunbridge-Wells.Org
Fri Sep 7 13:07:50 PDT 2007
Sounds good : I would remove one "the" at
> Evolving HTML to define and provide features that make the web more
> accessible, universal, and inclusive is socially responsible and
> the right thing to do. It demonstrates care for providing access to
> information for those who would otherwise be locked out and lose their
> opportunity to use the web. It aims to reach all people, extending the
> range of communication.
My only concern is whether "to evolve" is really a v.t.
I have always used it as a v.i., and it reads a little
strangely (to me) in Laura's prose. Could we say
"Ensuring that HTML evolves in such as way as to [define ...]" ?
** Phil.
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